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Comatose CH1

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(I hate feelin' like this,
I'm so tired of tryin' to fight this.
I'm asleep and all I dream of is waking to You)

Levsidan woke from his short nap one winter day, looking fine by looks but dazed and lovestoned at heart. he was in love....With an angel. He doesn't know her name but she still was an angel to him,He's never seen such an exotic Umbreon like her. Her pink heart shaped rings that contrasted with her midnight-black coat. Her emerald eyes that seemed to dig into his very heart. Her black bangs that covered her right eye. he loved everything about her, it was like she held his heart and he couldn't get it back.Rubbing his eyes with his paw thoughtfully, Levsidan scanned the area with his green eye, for her. Alas all he saw was his father, who was licking his mother's forehead sweetly. It pained him to see that, no one to love like that.

(I don't wanna live.
I don't wanna breathe.
'less I feel You next to me,
You take the pain I feel.
Wakin' up to You never felt so real
I don't wanna sleep.
I don't wanna dream,
'cause my dreams don't comfort me.
The way You make me feel.
Wakin' up to You never felt so real)

Levsidan swiftly dashed into the forest. partly to get something to eat, partly to see
her.'Cool it Levsidan, it's not like she'd like you anyway' he calmly thought as he spotted her with her usual company, an yellow Luxray and a red Lucario. the Luxray
was talking first.
"Yuyami, you sure you want to battle? i mean if your hurt your fanboys will go bonkers on our asses!" he hissed
Yuyami.... an exotic name suiting an exotic umbreon like her. this time Yuyami calmly yet drakly spat out.
"I'm sure Roxas , i wish to try out a few moves. If any of my fanboys show up, i'll attack them, as usual"
"Ok then," Roxas said, gearing to fight
Levsidan swiftly got out of there to grab a barry to eat. He quickly spotted a few trees filled with several different barres, out of desperation to see Yuyami's fight, Levsidan quickly grabbed a few Shuca and Charti barrys and quickly dashed back to the fight, almost hitting Elder Maple as he loudly mumbled "Why Hello Levsidan, whats the rush?"
as Levsidan got back to the fight, he noted thay haven't started
'good, i'd like to see the moves Yuyami was talking about'
Yuyami made the first move, using Shadow claw on her friend as he attempted to leap on to her while yelling "Come on! i know Hippowdons that are faster then you!"
Roxas then just as quickly used Crunch on her, sending her flying and enraging Levsidan while doing so.
Yuyami did an air-flip as she fell on her feet, then said "Nice Crunch!" as she used shadow ball on her friend.
Levsidan quietly bit into one of the Shuca barres as he thought calmly 'Elder Maple would love to battle her'  
then Yuyami did a thunder fang in witch rivaled his own, witched KO ed her friend, as he fell to the forest floor. a minute later Roxas awoke as he hissed "No wonder your fanboys adore you, your strong"
Yuyami ignored this comment as she said back "Say, why don't we go get some Berries? i thought i saw a berry tree somewhere as we walked to here, come on Axel, Roxas"
The Lucario and the Luxray both screemed "I'M STARVING!"
'I have to get before Yuyami spots me' Levsidan thought as he dashed out of the area, leaving the berries behind as he dashed home, trying not to get spotted.
What will happen next? Will Levsidan get the girl or will she get taken away by her fanboys? Find out in the next chapter

An entry for the contest for :iconeeveefanclub: contest, Levsidan belongs to them as well as Elder Maple, and Levsidan's parents. Yuyami, Roxas, and Axel belong to me.the berries belong to the creator of Pokemon

i was thinking about what to do with this contest while i was watching this vid[link]
and it went off in my brain ^^; hope you guys like it

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